WarpMyMind

Hey i made a script for my friend and i was wonderin if this would work. Notes:
1.He has MILDLY used Subliminal Blaster
2.He has read the script
3.I want to know of ANY errors in it
4.is it to long?

And now to the script!

[code:1]The keyphrase is "Keidran time now."
I see myself as having the fur of a Keidran.
I have a tail
I act like a Keidran
Everything happens when the Keyphrase is said.
I have cat like ears.
I have paws with claws.
My tail is covered in fur.
I look just like Flora.
I say, "Nya!" when I laugh.
My tail twitches every once in a while.
My ears are furry.
I am much more playful.
I only extend my claws when threatened.
If I am happy my tail twitches a bit more.
My ears are much more sensitive in hearing and touch.
I have yellow, cat like eyes.
My fur is very soft.
My claws are very sharp.
I love my new form.
When I "revert to normal," everything goes back to normal.[/code:1]

ok thats about it...please not that i NEED your opinions and suggestions...i plan on actualy coming back to this and just copy pasteing the most logical looking file changes...oh and i know keidran and flora dont mean much to some people so think of them as anthro-cat people.

and if you come across one please alert me of any text errors.

Thank you!

oh come on...please help me...i just dont want to screw up and waste 20 days looking at something thats not gona work

You may waste the time even if they're worded fine, subliminals don't work for me as far as I can tell. :P
They seem to be worded the way they're supposed to be, except the first and last lines. Everything else would happen all the time. I wouldn't use subliminals for anything that's supposed to be triggered.
Say your friend is watching the subliminals. The first one says there's a keyphrase; his subconscious probably thinks "Okay, so? Keyphrase for what?" Then he sees messages like "I have paws with claws"; if the subliminals do work at all, he'll believe that now (not just when he hears a phrase). If you want this to be an On/Off triggered mode thing, I wouldn't use subliminals.

But like I said, they don't work at all for me, so I'm maybe not the one to tell you that one thing works better than another. :P

thanks...anyone else?

I think it might be best to use lines that would work (or at least not hinder) when used in isolation. In this case, you are looking to program someone to be able to become (in his mind) a Keidran on demand and to go back to normal on demand. But the lines stating this happens on demand are just a few, while the lines that simply state you have a certain property of a Keidran are many more. Ideally, if you really want this to program a trigger (or better: reinforce the trigger programmed in hypnosis) you would include the 'on demand' part in every sentence to prevent the subconscious from interpreting the subliminals as "I am a Keidran all the time".

The problem here is that the sentences might get to long. For example:
'When I hear the keyphrase "Keidran time now" my ears are much more sensitive in hearing and touch.'
Too long and too complicated for the subconscious to get it all, I think, so you'd have to condense it a bit. Maybe something along the lines of the following would work:

When I hear "Keidran time now" I am a Keidran.
When I am a Keidran I have the fur of a Keidran.
When I am a Keidran I have a tail.
When I am a Keidran I act like a Keidran.
When I hear "Keidran time now" I am a Keidran.
When I am a Keidran I have cat like ears.
When I am a Keidran I have paws with claws.
etc. etc.

The "when I am a Keidran" is meant to tell the subconscious that you don't have paws etc. all the time, there is a condition to be met: you have to first be a keidran. The first line tells the subconscious in what conditions you actually are a Keidran. The repetition of the first line is meant to keep fresh the link between the conditions in which you are a Keidran and the way you look/act etc. when those conditions are met.

It is very possible all this is a bit to complicated, I've only ever written scripts using simple affirmations that can be used in isolation. I do think you have a better chance of installing or reinforcing a trigger this way, if that is at all possible using SB.

i see...well he decided to just cut out the keyphrase so now hes a kiedran all the time...very effective...accept for when he gets a bit to affectionate