here is the voting page submission:
This file will turn the listener into a suited and tied executive the moment that they hear "Hello, Mr. Executive." All they will be able to think of is productivity, and how much they need to look like a polished professional. The person who triggered them is their "executive" and they must obey whatever their executive wants them to do, as that is their "job." This will also instill a second trigger "Tie time for you," which causes the user to put on a shirt and tie, and a suit coat if possible, and then simply forget how to take it off or even loosen it until it is bedtime or they hear "take that stupid tie off."
Now this description seems overly complicated, as it wants to install two triggers when only one is necessary (not to mention the fact that its twice as hard to install two triggers than it is to install one). The second trigger seems superfluous and should be integrated into the main trigger, so that the subject will be compelled to wear at a minimum business casual while triggered and will prefer if possible to wear a business suit and a tie.
Secondly, I don't understand why "Mr. Executive" is to be triggered by his (or her) "executive" and then work for him or her. Maybe someone put this in here for a sexual kink, but I don't think that really meshes with the workaholic persona. Maybe if he were called "Mr. lower level management peon" or something, but it's hard to understand one executive would be serving at the beck and call of another executive.
Another idea would be to make the triggered subject distrustful of the government and liberal parties, because they seem to interfere with business. Subject feels compelled to express a conservative opinion and constantly complains about "liberals" :twisted:
Another idea: to change the trigger so that the file activates whenever the subject wears a certain colored tie.
Any ideas? Criticism?
