Hypnosis and D/s in fiction

Hey folks!
I've written a couple of books now; romance with a hypno-D/s theme. I'd appreciate hearing from some people who have actually gone long-term with something like this, just how close to the mark I am. (Nearly all my RL experience is either setting triggers that someone else can use in their relationship, or short-term things without the D/s)
Would also appreciate any interesting ideas that I could incorporate into the next book or two :)
My books:
[list][*]Walter's Choice (156 pages; love triangle) — [url=http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iLEM1EY4]UK[/url]/[url=http://www.amazon.com/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iLEM1EY4]US[/url]
[*]One Day… (42 pages; full consent) — [url=http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iMSAYYE8]UK[/url]/[url=http://www.amazon.com/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iMSAYYE8]US[/url][/list:u]
(And yeah... this is kind of an advert too. Would be nice if I could sell more than a dozen copies. I've already shared on some forums focusing with stories, but people over there seem to prefer magical mind control rather than hypnosis, or want to read non-consensual fiction. I hope here will be a good place to find folks interested in safe, sane, realistic erotic-romance.)
I've written a couple of books now; romance with a hypno-D/s theme. I'd appreciate hearing from some people who have actually gone long-term with something like this, just how close to the mark I am. (Nearly all my RL experience is either setting triggers that someone else can use in their relationship, or short-term things without the D/s)
Would also appreciate any interesting ideas that I could incorporate into the next book or two :)
My books:
[list][*]Walter's Choice (156 pages; love triangle) — [url=http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iLEM1EY4]UK[/url]/[url=http://www.amazon.com/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iLEM1EY4]US[/url]
[*]One Day… (42 pages; full consent) — [url=http://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iMSAYYE8]UK[/url]/[url=http://www.amazon.com/dp/B/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/i/\[url=(https?:\/\/[^\s\[]+):$uid\](.*?)\[\/url:$uid\]/iMSAYYE8]US[/url][/list:u]
(And yeah... this is kind of an advert too. Would be nice if I could sell more than a dozen copies. I've already shared on some forums focusing with stories, but people over there seem to prefer magical mind control rather than hypnosis, or want to read non-consensual fiction. I hope here will be a good place to find folks interested in safe, sane, realistic erotic-romance.)