I am new to writing scripts and I would like some feedback

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Hello! I am Mindless Exploits and I have recently stepped into the world of hypnosis by writing my first script. It is aimed at submissive betas and is designed to program their minds to be more so. I also tried something different in trying to permanently censor the sexual organs of dominant alphas from the sight of submissive betas unless otherwise triggered. Constructive criticism is certainly welcomed as I am new to this and would like to explore the world of hypnosis as the hypnotist as well as the subject.I am posting this here because I am hoping some Masters and Mistresses see it as something that could be very useful in training their slaves. Anecdotal feedback would be great. I used it myself a few times and I quite enjoyed it.

https://www.warpmymind.com/index.php?ga ... e_id=11562

EDIT:

I uploaded Session 2, available here:

https://www.warpmymind.com/index.php?ga ... e_id=11567

I have uploaded the Beta Curse, available here:

https://www.warpmymind.com/index.php?ga ... e_id=11593