Visualization files: How to make them more effective?

[Madeira]

I'm writing a script for my first "fantasy" file as a follow up to my recently created "Visualization Induction" and feel (at least for me) the more descriptive and detailed a visualization file is, the more effective it is. Knowing what to feel/smell/taste/hear more clearly helps, any other suggestions for improving this type of file?

[Madeira]

Cool, it's an eyes shut file, and it takes the listener though a night of sex... well hope this works