My First File

[fabisandine]

I finally finished my first script, but want feedback from you guys. It's a Female to Male Script. Because I'm new in this file making thing, any help will be gladly accepted. Thanks.
My first language isn't English (I'm Brazilian) so expect mistakes when you read it.

Oh, and the link is here: [url]http://www.warpmymind.com/Files/3702/FS-Good-Boy-Female-to-Male-Script.php[/url]

[fabisandine]

If someone non-premium want read and give feedback, just send a PM to me, kay?
Thanks