Male Wanker-Script

[TeenWolf]

Just a script I wonder if anyone's interested in.Just the body, mind.

Aswell as feeling relaxed, you're feeling a different sensation build.It's an exciting feeling.It's an addictive feeling.It's a horny-horny feeling.You notice...that as you concentrate on this feeling....it becomes more...enjoyable...Making you more...and more....addicted to this feeling...And as you lie there, enjoying the horny sensation...you notice....notice that you are getting a boner....But not just any boner....This is the most intense boner you've had...You can feel it begin already....You can feel how it's getting....larger....and bigger....the veins pulsing....Getting a boner in trance shows you are enjoying the suggestions....Enjoying the obedience....Enjoying being horny....And this boner is becoming even more intense....You feel as if nothing in the world is important anymore...Nothing is important...Only your cock...Only your cock is important...And this horny sensation is flowing through your cock now....And....You notice that your hand is moving down to touch it....Stroke it....Feel it....Pump it....And....As soon as you touch your cock....You notice that you zone out....Zone out until you only think of pumping your cock....Wanking....That's what you're becoming....A wanker....Wanting to jack off whenever you can....And....as these words go into your subconcious....you can picture yourself....naked....Just a script I wonder if anyone's interested in.Just the body, mind.

Aswell as feeling relaxed, you're feeling a different sensation build.It's an exciting feeling.It's an addictive feeling.It's a horny-horny feeling.You notice...that as you concentrate on this feeling....it becomes more...enjoyable...Making you more...and more....addicted to this feeling...And as you lie there, enjoying the horny sensation...you notice....notice that you are getting a boner....But not just any boner....This is the most intense boner you've had...You can feel it begin already....You can feel how it's getting....larger....and bigger....the veins pulsing....Getting a boner in trance shows you are enjoying the suggestions....Enjoying the obedience....Enjoying being horny....And this boner is becoming even more intense....You feel as if nothing in the world is important anymore...Nothing is important...Only your cock...Only your cock is important...And this horny sensation is flowing through your cock now....And....You notice that your hand is moving down to touch it....Stroke it....Feel it....Pump it....And....As soon as you touch your cock....You notice that you zone out....Zone out until you only think of pumping your cock....Wanking....That's what you're becoming....A wanker....Wanting to jack off whenever you can....And....as these words go into your subconcious....you can picture yourself....naked....jacking off....either to gay porn...or straight porn...Or....Maybe...you'll be so horny you won't need any....Picture yourself....Wrapping your hand round your pulsing cock....and feeling it thrust....Once....Twice...Three times...becoming faster and faster...feeling that horny sensation bubble up....feel it now....feel yourself about to....about to....cum....feel it all....on the count of 3.....you'll feel yourself cum.....1.....2......3.....Feel how good that felt....Feel how you want it more....And more....And more....Feel it rage through you...Wanting to come more and more....More frequent...More addicted to pumping your cock....Wanking....Being naked....Feeling it become part of you....Feeling it become so....addictive....It's making you more....and more....masculine....Wanting to wank....And....you'll feel so confident with yourself....Knowing you wanked off today....And....On the count of 5....you will wake up....BUT....this feeling of horniness will stay .... your hard boner will take a while to go down....and....your hunger to cum will also stay...Forever....

5....Waking up...
4...Wanting to pump.Wanting to jack off....
3...Becoming more and more....
2....Of a Wanker on the count of....
1....Jack off as much as you want....

What d'you all think? Only my second script...

[Jeshi]

This is the wrong place to put it I'm pretty sure. But I'll give criticism anyways.

First of all, try using spaces or punctuation instead of ............. between everything. It's sort of annoying to read When...everything...is...implying..that...something...is...either...missing...or...has...a...pause...after...it...

Also, if you want them to cum at a specific time, you should mention that they won't cum until the time when you make them cum. And if you want them to still want to cum and stay horny after they cum, you should also mention that before they cum.

ie "And you being to stroke yourself, but you won't cum until I tell you to..."(See, that's a proper use of ellipsis, putting somewhere to imply that something is left out)"...And now on the count of 3, You're going to cum, but after you cum you will still stay horny, still want to cum, and still continue to stroke your cock..."

Just examples, of course in a real script it would have to be written better and repeat itself more to dig the suggestions in.

Also, just a warning: Hypnosis can affect how somebody thinks, but it can't really modify actual biological functions. You can tell them to stay horny after they cum, but chances are that after they cum they'll become tired and restless and won't want to keep stroking. If you're trying to make a script that counter-acts that feeling you'll probably want to spend more time in the script focusing on that.

Otherwise it's a good script and is quite erotic. I hope you work on it and can eventually turn out a good finished script that may someday be recorded by someone.

[jearns]

i recorded it! my first script recording so let me know how it is.

i hope it helps you get horny to wank like it did to me!