Perm Anthro Arctic Wolf script *CORRECT script posted*

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Perm Anthro Arctic Wolf script *CORRECT script posted*

Postby MidnightFire24 » July 13th, 2010, 11:42 pm

Alright, this is a different script, I noticed I had the WRONG script up here, this script, is the one I meant to post but didn't for some reason. now, this is the final piece, it is one of my more dynamic ones but the way I wrote it/phrased it is basically in a way that I find is most effective for me, it may be different for others and I can do a custom script for your own needs if necessary

Now, The script. in this piece I tried to use as much positive reinforcement in here as I could. I hope this is good enough for most folks, this is the kind of file that I've had the bigger successes with format wise *I haven't used any permanent files til now due to the lack of this file's existence*, Also I tried to be detailed while not going overboard, I think I was successful. and hope to have this recorded as follows and thanks ahead for your time.

Now, you are about to experience something very special
Something you've always wanted to experience
Something of very deep, almost spiritual importance to you,
Something you've thought long and hard about
And now this is your chance to make those thoughts reality
What that experience is that you are starting to transform
Physically and permanently into an anthropomorphic arctic wolf .
As the effects set in, the feel, the energy, so positive, so real
As the effects begin to become more intense
You begin feeling very dense, snow white fur
Growing all over every square inch of your body
It grows in especially thick around and down your upper backline
The next changes are the more psychical changes
But this doesn't matter to you, this is a gift to you
The next change is that your hands are becoming more pawlike.
First, Your nails on both begin to blacken and lengthen into sharp claws
They begin growing rough but soft black pads
They begin growing in a few places on each hand, I will explain where now
They begin growing on the tips of each digit,
And then three spots on your palms
One large triangular spot on the surface of each palm
Then two smaller areas on the bottoms of your wrists.
You know well what this looks like
For you have seen this many times before
You still retain your opposible thumbs.
Next your feet will become four toed hindpaws.
Your nails on both blacken and lengthen into sharp claws
Your two outer toes on each foot merging together into one painlessly
The 2 middle digits become the longest of the four
While the 2 outer digits become slightly shorter
Both hindpaws will grow black leathery pads.
Similar to the ones on your handpaws
On the bottoms of all 4 digits and the balls of both
They will then elongate a few inches
Leaving your knees bent at a slight angle
Until your ankles reside in mid air when you stand
Again, You know well what this looks like
For you have seen this many times before
Next is one of the best parts of this change
That being you will begin to grow a tail.
You feel pressure build at the base of your spine
As the pressure dissipates, you feel a small nub push out
And quickly elongate out to be about 2 ft long
Then thick soft white fur begins covering the entire length
Again, You know well what this looks like
And this is what is happening to you now
Now, Last but not least the changes move into your head and face
Your ears begin moving upwards to their respective top corners
Growing into that familiar triangular shape
Each of them being able to notice sounds from different directions
Again, You know well what this looks like
For you have seen this many times before
Now for the big finish to this transformation
As next you notice your jaws begin to elongate outwards
As this happens your canines spread out and sharpen into points
Your nose then merges together with your jawline
As it moves to tip your newly formed muzzle
Becoming black, triangular, leathery and wet
And thousands of times more sensitive than that of your human form
Last change to happen is that your eyes begin change shape and color
Becoming the sharp golden almond shaped orbs of a wolf
Becoming thousands of times better than that of your human form
They are especially well adopted to the nighttime
And you are now also able to detect movement much more accurately
With this final change the transformation completes
Remember, the effects of this file are permanent so listen with care
You will you come back to this file, listening over and over
Until your transformation is complete, until you can take in every detail until you are what you wanted to be
And I hope you'll take a lot away from this
And enjoy who and what you are now
*insert awakener here*
Thank you for listening and I hope you enjoyed!
Last edited by MidnightFire24 on September 4th, 2010, 2:17 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby MidnightFire24 » July 15th, 2010, 2:41 pm

Guys this is serious. I really need a recorder ASAP. Subliminal messaging of this isnt enough for it to work, I need a full on non-robotic sounding file in hopes of having this work. please give me a few minutes of your time and help me out if you can. thanks!
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Postby Rukoya » August 31st, 2010, 8:03 am

Well there are a few things you could use...VCL is a good sound recorder and virtual hypnosis is a good file to load a script and use that and its not that robotic sounding.
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Postby ocntrl » August 31st, 2010, 9:36 am

I ill try to record it yet this week.
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Postby DKaiser » August 31st, 2010, 4:58 pm

Now, I might be missing a few things, because I only skimmed it a couple of times, but a few suggestions:

Where's the actual trigger for changing in the first place? You have the revert trigger, but not one to actually cause the change. I'd recommend a quick speak about it before the effects, and a reminder afterwords.

"Is that they will cause you to become an arctic wolf || From the inside out completely". An important thing to keep in mind is people using the file that are too suggestible. Hence, while it won't come up very often at all, it's important to clarify what the file does in the file. In this case, the line could be misconstrued as being a physical and mental change, which might not be the best idea for a file that requires a revert trigger. Thus, if you don't want a mental change, point that out. If you do, add effects to the intent of allowing for some personality changes but still being aware enough to use the revert trigger.

"That aside, you promise me your safety". Line not really needed. If a person is not safe and secure when doing hypnosis, they won't be getting a deep trance anyway. As for safety when using the trigger, by putting the suggestions that it will only happen when in a safe environment, it doesn't need this repeat.

Also, the file is a longer one, and transformation files are helped a lot by having a deep trance. Thus, perhaps sprinkle in some suggestions similar to the induction, of going deeper(or whatever words to that effect you want). You don't need many, generally one every 2-4 minutes is sufficient. Also, don't place the suggestion in the middle of something you're talking about: get to a good stopping point, then deepen(such as after the head suggestions, or the stance ones).

I am unfortunately too busy right now(curse thou, evil school!) to spend a good bit of time editing the script, but if you can get those changes in, I'd be happy to record it for you.
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