From MRhelllo: my mp3 & script- how did you like it??

[MRhello]

Hello all:

This is a short little discussion for my files I have uploaded: My long induction script, and my hypnosis check script (which, by the way, has the mp3 on it now). I would LOVE some feedback on the script, and the style of the file. I will treat all comments in here fairly, and will work on my future files with the improvements suggested here. However, please, no comments like: "thiz sux"or "i eated your cookie"- Essentially, no spam or derogatory comments. However, constructive criticism will be accepted with open arms, so to speak.

Thanks again,

MRhello

PS: Please fill out the poll, as well as give comment- They will both help me!

[Wildsprite]

very well done script, I think when put to file it will be nice to see how it works on people

[MRhello]

Hello all:

Just a small side note: the MP3 file is now with the script- just click on the title to get the mp3! It is voiced by a synthesized female voice, similar to those used in the popular self-hypnosis program, "Virtual Hypnotist". Have fun with my first recording!

MRhello

PS: Thanks for the feedback, WildSprite! Kudos to you!

EDIT: I will consider making scripts and recording them in the synth-voices I currently have. This offer is open to anyone, so feel free to drop me a PM! Thanks!

[AFA]

The scripts seam pretty good but that synthesized voice was a bit annoying. If it wasn’t for me playing “Thrum” by MN_FriendlyGuy in the background I don’t think I would have been able to go under at all.

Would you like me to record this for you or do you think you will get a mic in the future?