hypnotic stories

[TheWriterHypnotic]

Hi everyone I am new and I have posted a couple files which are hypnotic stories i dont know if it has been done before. The idea is that when someone reads a story they automatically place themself in the story while at the same the story puts them in a light trance so they feel empathy for the people in the story. By shifting some of the words arounds in order to deepen trance then suggestions can be made

so its a matter of trial an error and I need as much feedback as possible to get the recipe right so please tell me what you think any feedback at all would help :?:

[Duckypin]

great idea, I hope it works!

[TheWriterHypnotic]

Thanks Duckypin I hope so to. So far there have been a couple who really liked it and others who thought the whole idea is wrong. Either way I know this will work but it might take a lot of practice.

[Raichu]

I wish you the best of luck with it ^^