newman wrote:
I want to stroke my cock when I see High Heels but can't cum
I feel like I am cumming when I see High Heels
These two lines need to be changed. The first line could be interpreted that ONLY when he can't come AND he sees high heels, he wants to stroke his cock. And the second line could be interpreted as we WILL come when he sees high heels. Also it's bad to use "can't come", because the subconscious can only understand direct language and not can't or won't. It simply ignores those words, and you get sentences that have the opposite meaning than what you were looking for! So the first sentence may also be understood as:
I want to strok my cock when I see High Heels but cum. - So instead of masturbating he just explodes - which is cool enough, but not what was intended, I think! :-)
Try doing these lines as:
I want to stroke my cock - unable to cum - when I see High Heels.
Extremely horny and unable to cum when I see High Heels.
Just my two cents.
Cardigan