My very first script

[Realm]

This is a script I'm planning to record shortly, but it's my first one and I honestly don't know how well written it is for a hypnosis file. Anyway I just thought I'd post it here in case anyone would care to throw in a tip.







So very deep, so very relaxed.

Your subconscious mind is now completely open, and ready to make the changes you desire.

Your subconscious mind is very powerful. Your subconscious mind knows how to let you experience all kinds of things, whether you may think they are really happening or not.

Your subconscious mind can even affect your perception of time.

There have been times in your life when your mind has made a long period of time seem to go by in an instant.

Your mind can also make the briefest moment, a second, feel like an hour, a day, a month, even a year.

Your mind has this power. It has the power to completely alter how you experience the passage of time.

It can make the briefest moment, a second, feel like an hour, a day, a month, even a year.

You want your mind to have this control over your consciousness, because when your mind has this control it can do so much for you.

It can make you feel better than you've ever felt before. Your mind has this power.

Now your mind is going to remember what it feels like to have a wonderful, pleasurable orgasm. The strongest orgasm you have ever had.

And if you cannot remember a time when you had a very strong orgasm, that is ok. Because your mind knows how it can intensify whatever it may have experienced in the past.

Your mind will now imagine how it would feel if that orgasm were so powerful, so pleasurable, it could completely overwhelm you.

Such a strong orgasm you would just be lost in the pleasure. Everything else would seem to fade away.

Now your mind can imagine the areas on your body where you feel this pleasure, and allow it to spread out. To engulf your entire body. To allow every cell in your body to feel this pleasure.

Your mind will hold on to this feeling. It will remember exactly how to make you experience this wonderful, orgasmic sensation

So that whenever you hear the phrase "PHRASE HERE", you will immediately begin to feel this incredible orgasm, more powerful than anything you have ever felt before.

This orgasm will last for 5 minutes in reality. And your mind will make you perceive every second as an hour, a day, a month, even a year.

You will experience this overwhelming orgasm for 5 minutes of real time, but each second will last so long, an hour, a day, a month, even a year.

With each moment the sensation of pleasure will increase exponentially. With each wave the sensation will double until you are at the limits of our tolerance for pleasure.

Each and every time you hear the phrase "PHRASE HERE", you will immediately begin to feel the most incredible orgasm, more powerful than anything you have ever felt before.

This orgasm will last for 5 minutes in reality, but your mind will make you perceive each and every second as a whole hour, a day, a month, even a year.

Your mind will do this for you because you desire it. It will simply happen, because your mind wants to fulfill that desire. You will have no control over this.

Soon it will be time to wake back up. And when you are awake, you will have no conscious memory of what you have heard in this file. You will remember nothing.

It will be as though you had gone into trance for an instant.

You will have no conscious memory of this file, but your subconscious mind will remember every detail.

Your subconscious mind will remember every detail of this file. Your subconscious mind will be ready to respond to the trigger phrase each and every time you hear it when you are awake.

Now it is time to wake back up. You will awake on the count of 5 and feel wonderful and refreshed.

1, Slowly waking up. 2, more awake now. 3, coming out of trance. 4, almost completely awake now. 5. You are now fully awake.

[Jeshi]

I'd recommend submitting the script, then asking for critique in the comments. That way we get a title, description. And don't have to read it all in a forum topic(Which at least for me is not the most comfortable thing for my eyes)

[Realm]

I would have done that but for three reasons. Firstly, people without premium accounts cannot access script files. Secondly, I wasn't sure how many people check every new script that gets submitted so I thought I might get more feedback this way. Thirdly, I want to wait until I've got a script that's definitely finished before submitting it. If it is hard on the eyes you could always copy-paste it into word.

[angel123]

I love it Realm and I would use it :wink:

.... would love it to work too :oops:

[Realm]

I recorded it yesterday so I should be able to get it all finished and uploaded a little later today.

[Realm]

Ok it's up. "5 Minute Orgasm With Time Distortion".