My First File

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My First File

Postby fabisandine » October 3rd, 2010, 8:07 pm

I finally finished my first script, but want feedback from you guys. It's a Female to Male Script. Because I'm new in this file making thing, any help will be gladly accepted. Thanks.
My first language isn't English (I'm Brazilian) so expect mistakes when you read it.

Oh, and the link is here: [url]http://www.warpmymind.com/Files/3702/FS-Good-Boy-Female-to-Male-Script.php[/url]
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Postby fabisandine » October 3rd, 2010, 8:13 pm

If someone non-premium want read and give feedback, just send a PM to me, kay?
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