Requesting: Feedback & editing help

[demigraff]

Hi folks,

I've recently posted a new file, "first person induction", recorded by my wife. This is mostly supposed to be a sample of her voice, so I can find out if people would like more from her.

Unfortunately, there's a few bits in the file where she says the wrong word and goes back to correct herself. I should be able to edit this fairly easily, but I can't get audacity to run on my laptop.

So while I'm struggling to make it work, I'd like to ask for a couple of things. Firstly, can anyone give me (or her) any constructive feedback, like what we could change. Or if you actually like her accent, what kind of files would be most appreciated.

Secondly, can someone with a working audio editor please clean up the file a little for me?

Cheers,
Master Angel