Feedback request

[sfhypno]

Fellow Hypnophiles,

I've just created a couple of new files called:

[URL=http://www.warpmymind.com/Files/6389/SFHypno---Hypno-Charity.php]SFHypno - Hypno Charity[/URL]
[URL=http://www.warpmymind.com/Files/6330/SFHypno---Simon-Says.php]SFHypno - Simon Says[/URL]

Before recording any more, I thought it would be good to ask for critiques so that I can make any necessary adjustments. If you're able to download those files, I'd love any feedback on ways to improve them.

Thanks!

[WatDo]

You have good pacing and a good voice. I think the only thing you have to work on is the quality. It's fine as is, but there's some strange background noise that is audible when the volume is turned up.

[sfhypno]

Thanks, WatDo! I noticed some hiss with the Simon Says file, so I tried to remove that from the Charity one. I'll keep working on it.

[sfhypno]

If anyone else has any suggestions, I'd love to hear them. If not, I'll just plow ahead, so to speak.

Thanks!