by Deej » December 10th, 2009, 11:26 pm
This was my first listen through, so I'm not sure how much it affected me or not, but I do have a few things to say about it anyways.
I enjoyed this for a few things that might be considered more "subtle" I like the fact that the three files each seemed to be talking to their own area of my mind; the first file seeming to be up front as if in person, the second seeming to the left and subconscious, the third seeming to be on the right and towards my conscious. The waves throughout are also a nice effect as they seem to serve two effects: One as a "distractionary" device so that your mind either won't remember what it's hearing and/or that it's being entranced but also acting to keep your thoughts from straying too far, and two it seemed to move the instructions from left to right, almost as if filing for better use.
One minor complaint is that, although the three voices working on congruency seems like it would be effective for many of the same reasons as the waves (no one spot to focus your mind on and get lost in thought, possibly not even realizing you're entranced), said effects are somewhat lost due to the fact that the third file on the "right" side ends earlier, leaving only two voices. This normally wouldn't be a problem except that the second on one the "left," is a bit muffled (all the better to reach said subconscious though) and therefore most people might end up only hearing the first voice, and potentially risk being lost in thought. I know this isn't so much your fault as it is the file's length issue, but still it's a bit of a wrench in the machine is all.
Not trying to seem nitpicky at all, as I loved the file and the subtleties of it, it's just that the aspects I love cut short towards the end. Overall though, sounds like a great file :)