To M'lady/ would-be hypno-teacher: Mind you, as of roughly half an hour prior to leaving this message for this file, I had left another series of comments in the butt growth comments section to the effect of promising to give the file a chance but then i changed my mind to review this file instead & I am truly sorry but I must be honest in my point of view about your chosen vocal approach in this recording since it seems, not only a little off-putting, but the tone & drawn out vocalization in this & all your other recordings is very annoying to me that it completely detracts from all effort & any possible skill that you may have put into your recordings. Again, I am terribly sorry if I seem severely blunt. HOWEVER, it is my honest opinion that you need to either find a decent computer TTS voice model to make the recordings with like either Goddess Gracie or Nina Temptress. OR, you need to change your tonal approach because to me, it sounds as if you are talking as if you have just woken up after a very wild night of partying & you are still hung over from either drinking or smoking something that really messed you up that it carried over to the next day. Sorry!! No offense meant but I just feel as if you need to redo it all because what may work for some hypnotists & some of their patrons, doesn't always work for all & in your case because of the tonal approach that you used, it was severely off-putting to me.