So your basic technique is very good. You've got a good voice, decent audio quality, good imagery and some nice language. This is a well-done basic erotic progressive relaxation induction. It does have some fundamental flaws you need to work on. For one, your name is not on the file, and there is no way to message you (for some reason WMM doesn't let me do it.) So your testing suggestion isn't going to actually be possible for your subjects to complete. The other main issue is your dishonesty with the contents and intent of this file. There's a LOT more suggestions in here than just the suggestion to message you to show that it worked. You are establishing a D/s dynamic with the subject, setting up a positive behavior reinforcement trigger, planting that the listener wants to submit to you and listen to your files, "a pleasure only I can give you, and you can only get from this file" is a BIG suggestion right there. There's suggestions about obedience, and being a good drone. There's permissive suggestions about being turned on by hypnosis. You are also suggesting amnesia for sending you a message. There's only one explicit command, but there's a lot of implicit suggestions you make. You need to give a better description of your files than this. You need to say that this is a file intended to prepare the listener to submit to you. That there is a D/s dynamic, mentions of dronification, etc. You should also mention that you are assuming the listening has a dick. While you did check the "gay male" option on WMM, the little icon is easy to miss, and more importantly, there are gay men who do not have penises. The file itself is fine really, the issue is that at the beginning when you say it's just a basic file that takes down you and brings you, is dishonest. The listener cannot properly make an informed decision as to what they are listening to. The amnesia is also sketchy. It makes you seem like you are not a trustworthy hypnotist. If you want to do hypnoplay with people, you need to be someone people can trust with their minds. Not everyone is experienced enough to ignore suggestions they don't jive with, or to be OK if they were commanded to message you and then are not able to message you. Your craft is good. To be clear. It's an enjoyable and hot file for what it is, you just need to describe it better, and make sure you're commanding the listener to do something they're actually able to do.

Thanks for your feedback, a lot of your comments were things i had never even considered or thought of. Ill be much more aware of that in the future if i ever make more files. I'm trying to figure out how to edit the description as soon as im able to i will.

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