The wording in this script is hilarious and strange. For instance, It starts out with \"CongrATulations listener! you are in a trance... Good for you... \" It uses words like \"Noggin\" and comparisons like \"drifting like smoke in a gas chamber\" describing being awake as \"Bacony\" Also instead of \"He or she or it\" you can just use \"They\". Try using more normal relaxed words. It\'s written well it\'s just that it seems very peppy and if I was in trance and this was in the playlist, the words would be more likely to wake me up then the change in voice. I\'d probably wake up from laughing.