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  • CycoMelody - Perfect Premature Ejaculator — $20    
    So you like to be humiliated do you? Well boys have I got the file for you. Kiss your ability to control your cum good bye as you listen to this file. That\'s right, imagine, your cock is more sensitive so every little thing that touches it is a turn on. You won\'t remember when you are going to cum... after all, what kind of premature ejaculator knows he is going to? How about when you go on a date, all you can think about is sex, so you are already near cumming as soon as your pants are off. You know you like to be humiliated, so give a girl a good reason to laugh at you!

    Humiliation
    English/Ambiguous/TTS
    Rating: ★★★★☆ (6)
    Length: 20:00
    Downloads: 230
    2010-07-06
    Permanent
    SylviaBlack2010-08-30 
    This is Tainted Sins, Sylvia Black\'s co-writer (she\'s currently back in the hospital). Anyway, I love the premise of this recording, but a fifteen minute induction with less than five minutes of suggestions is a bit disappointing, especially for a pay file. I\'d recommend picking up a copy of \"Sin and Syntax\" by Constance Hale and possibly \"Beginnings, Middles & Ends\" by Nancy Kress. In the meantime, you might consider a rewrite. Since you use a walking through the woods induction, there\'s a lot of potential for adding and strengthening the suggestions during the journey; subtle at first, the leaves whispering in the wind, then maybe illusions of you trying to make love to a woman and blushing, maybe even crying, when he cums mere moments after entering her. Then by the time the listener arrives at the lake, your clear and unyielding commands would make for a fine climax (pardon the pun) rather than feeling like we\'ve just begun only to have it end a few minutes latter.--Please take this as constructive criticism, no insult intended.
    slave_male492012-04-02 
    Saddened to read SylviaBlack\'s comments, above...would really like a good file along these lines.