I have been sent a very kind file that ordered me (or rather asked me nicely) to post a list of the mind control stories i like best, so here goes:

Cathy and Becky
Maryanne's First (unfortunately deleted a long time ago)
A Cheerleader's Story (same as above)
The Indiginities of Clare - The Perfect Secretary
The Hypnotizing Megan Chronicles
Good Girl (Sinsub)

There may be more but I can't think of them right now...