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Re: Retribution Part 4 : All things come to she who waits - EMG

Very nice although it does feel a bit like more of the same. I think you should include a bit either about destroying her identity(temporarily or permanently) or perhaps have them use her somewhere besides the Dr's office. She sounds like she should be pretty functional for other places although they might cause a "relaps" that sends her back for more programming.

Re: Retribution Part 4 : All things come to she who waits - missypuss

Yes, I agree about destroying her identity , I think thats what the next chapter will deal with, it IS all leading to her becoming an object, permanently, and completely. As far as leaving the clinic goes, I agree, it would be nice to see her at home, with Tori and David, serving them both, just the way Tori planned it....

Re: Retribution Part 4 : All things come to she who waits - chrisea623

Looking forward to more!

Re: Retribution Part 4 : All things come to she who waits - Jorua

Nicely done, I look forward to reading more.

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