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Danielle's First Time

by jslavel

Danielle's First Time

Danielle was nervous. She had never been hypnotized before, but here she was, onstage in front of everybody, about to let herself be put in a trance. She was one of five volunteers, all female. The hypnotist stepped forward, a warm, comforting smile on his face.

“Now ladies, there is absolutely nothing to worry about here. I am a trained professional and I have done this many times before. And it almost never goes wrong!”

Danielle’s eyebrows jumped up. “Almost?”

“Well, yes… but that newlywed couple was much happier being left on the chicken farm!”

The hypnotist laughed, as did the audience, and the volunteers all giggled nervously.

“Trust me. You have nothing to fear, my dears. Now, I want you all to sit back in your chairs, close your eyes, and relax. Feel your muscles and your minds shutting down. No thought, no movement…”

Danielle closed her eyes and tried to empty her mind, but found herself unable to fully let go.

“Imagine yourselves as statues. Completely still, as if sculpted out of granite. No movement whatsoever. In fact, I want you to try to move. You will find that the more you try, the heavier your body becomes. Soon, you find that you are just a stone statue, fixed in place. Rigid. Silent. Serene…”

Danielle tried to follow the hypnotist’s instructions, but her mind kept wandering. She was thinking about that essay that was due at the end of the week. “I should really start that. And Jeff is taking me out Friday night… did I remember to leave food out for Anabelle?!”

“…and now you find that your thoughts are becoming more and more vague. It’s harder to consciously focus on a single thought for very long. Stop trying. Let your mind go. Let me do the thinking for you…”

Danielle didn’t believe the hypnosis was working, as she didn’t feel any different. But she continued to sit, playing along…

“Now, I will count down from five to one. And when I reach one, I will snap my fingers. And each of you will perform the command I just gave you.”

“Wait, what command?” thought Danielle. She didn’t remember the hypnotist giving her a command…

“Five. Your entire body is frozen, petrified, locked firmly in place.

Four. Your mind is empty and blank, awaiting my orders.

Three. So relaxed, so obedient.

Two. So blissfully unaware. And…

One.”

*SNAP*

As soon as the hypnotist snapped his fingers, the girls, including Danielle, came to life. The girl on the far left, a tall, pretty blonde, stood up and posed with her right hand on her hip, her left hand behind her head. She smiled, then froze in place.

The girl to her right, a short Asian girl, stood and walked behind her chair. She grasped it with both hands, threw back her head, then froze as if in the middle of a sexy dance.

The girl in the center, a black girl who was the youngest of the five at 19, stood and placed one leg on her chair, and placed her right elbow on her knee and her hand cupped her chin, as she froze as if deep in thought.

The girl to Danielle’s immediate left, a skinny redhead, stood in front of her chair and placed her hands over her collar, as if to show of her cleavage, then she too froze in place.

Danielle remained seated, however.

“I don’t know what I’m supposed to do!” she thought. She simply could not recall her command.

“Now then, you may all notice the lovely Hispanic lady on the far right has remained seated. You see, she does not believe in the power of hypnosis. So rather than command her to freeze, I thought I would provide an example of the true power of hypnosis to her.

Danielle. Stand up.”

Danielle immediately did as she was told. “Hey, I didn’t tell my body to move!” she thought.

“Do ten jumping jacks, then sit down.”

Without even thinking about, Danielle did the ten jumping jacks, then took her seat.

“Wow, he really did it!” thought Danielle.

“Now Danielle. I want you to think about something for me. I want you to think about all the liquids you had to drink today. I’m sure you drank quite a bit…”

“Huh, I guess so,” Danielle thought. “Those three cups of coffee, a glass of orange juice, a cup of tea, and those four water bottles… I was pretty thirsty.”

“Of course, considering how much you drank, I’m sure you had to go to the bathroom quite a bit…”

“Yeah, I did, now that I think about it…” she thought.

“In fact, even right now, you can feel your bladder beginning to fill again.”

Danielle flinched as she began to feel a familiar pressure in her abdomen.

“Danielle, you have to pee.”

“Oh god, he’s right! I do have to pee!”

*SNAP*

“Now, you are completely frozen, Danielle. Both in body, and in mind. Frozen in place, frozen in your last thought.”

“Gotta pee! Gotta pee! Gotta pee!” Danielle repeated in her mind, as if on loop, unable to think of anything else.

“And now, let’s get to the REAL fun. Danielle, until I release you, you will sit, frozen, unable to think of anything but your bladder. No other thoughts, except how badly you need to go. I’ll talk to you soon…”

“Gotta pee! Gotta pee!” Danielle mindlessly repeated the mantra in her head, no other thoughts allowed to form.

The hypnotist walked over to the blonde.

“What is your name, my dear?”

“Chloe” she breathlessly said.

“Chloe, you are now and forever a store mannequin. You live to pose in windows, showing off the latest fashions. When you leave here, you will call the number on the card I have slipped in your pocket. Welcome to the world of mannequin modeling, Chloe.”

He moved on to the Asian girl.

“And what is your name?”

“Mia.” said the small girl.

“Mia. Such a beautiful body. You are quite adept at dancing, Mia. When the show is over, you will speak to the manager of this club about working as an exotic dancer on their weekend shows.”

The hypnotist moved to the black girl, but looked over at Danielle first.

“Danielle, I trust your holding up. But it wasn’t wise to drink another bottle of water when you are already SO FULL.”

Danielle felt her bladder get even fuller. “Gotta pee! Gotta pee! Gotta pee!” she echoed to herself.

“Now, what is your name, my dear?”

“Christa,” replied the dark skinned beauty.

“Christa, you seem like such a smart girl. However, you might be too smart for your own good. So, when you leave here, you will find that everything you learned past second grade will be wiped from your mind. Even spelling and basic math will be difficult for you. You will see me after the show, and I will connect you with a friend who can get you a job suitable for a girl of your low intelligence.”

He moved onto the redhead.

“And what is your name?”

“Cassie,” the girl monotoned.

“Cassie, you are such a tease. Don’t taunt, flaunt! When you leave here, you will flash your breasts at the first man you see. After that, you will be brimming with confidence. You will call the number on the card I have slipped in your bra. And you will begin a new career.”

The hypnotist then moved to Danielle.

“Danielle. It’s hard to say, but I’m guessing you really need a bathroom right now, huh?”

“Gotta pee! Gotta pee!” she thought.

“When you leave here, you will forget about your need to pee. You will feel thirsty and you will purchase and drink a large bottle of water. Anytime you start to feel as if you need to pee, you will feel thirsty and you will drink something. And you will forget that you need to go to the bathroom. Only when you feel yourself about to lose control of your bladder, will you remember your need. And then it will be too late.”

“Gotta pee! Gotta pee!” thought Danielle.

“You all have your instructions. Now, it is time to wake up. I will count down from three to one and you will awaken, feeling refreshed, your orders firmly planted within your subconscious, but with no conscious memory of what has happened.

Three.

Two.

One. Wake up, ladies!”

Danielle’s mind returned to her as she stretched out in her chair.

“Let’s give these girls a hand, huh?!”

The crowd(all under the control of the hypnotist) clapped and cheered as the girls smiled and stepped off the stage. Danielle was feeling thirsty and sought out a vending machine. Chloe noticed the card in her pocket and walked off as she dialed a number on her phone. Mia went to speak to the club manager, while Cassie headed for her car. On her way out, she passed a man in a business suit and flashed her breasts at him. When she picked up the card that slipped out of her bra, she smiled as she dialed the number on her phone. Christa, looking dazed, stayed behind and talked to the hypnotist…

Danielle drank down a 24 ounce bottle of water, feeling her thirst quenched. But as she drove home, she felt the water hit her bladder and thought about pulling over…

“Gee, I’m thirsty again.”

She spotted a gas station and convenience store. As she walked in, she spotted the restrooms. She walked in that direction… then turned left and purchased a bottle of Gatorade. As she got back in the car, she gulped the bottle down, feeling quite refreshed.

After a twenty minute drive, Danielle pulled into her driveway. She parked the car and entered the apartment, her bladder now quite full. Danielle pushed up on the elevator and stepped in. She pushed the button for the fifth floor, when suddenly, she realized she really had to pee. She danced in place as the elevator reached the second floor and stopped. The door opened and in walked a group of clearly drunk girls, classmates of Danielle’s. She tried to hide her need, but she was past her bursting point. As the elevator reached the third floor and stopped, Danielle gasped. As her bladder gave out on her, the door opened and in walked the House Advisor, a strict woman in her early twenties. Seeing the group of drunk girls before her, and this adult who could not control her bladder, the woman immediately called the school board. The next morning, Danielle and the other girls were expelled.

Danielle had no idea what to do. Her college dreams had been ruined. And she was thirsty. Without a second thought, she bought large bottle of Pepsi, and called the hypnotist…

WHERE ARE THEY NOW?

Chloe: Chloe can be found in only the trendiest department stores, a human mannequin, being rented out weekly to the highest bidder.

Mia: Mia became the star dancer at the nightclub and soon rose to a managerial position, giving her the power to hire and fire, as well as her pick of the sexiest girls to be her partners.

Christa: Her mind wiped of everything she learned after second grade, Christa now does porn to make rent. Because she can barely spell basic three letter words, she only does sex scenes.

Cassie: Cassie became a big time stripper, Cassieopia, and yes, she does house calls.

Danielle: Kicked out of college, and unable to control her bladder, Danielle called the hypnotist. He took her in and made her his adult baby. Now she wears diapers, drinks her milk out of a bottle, and sleeps in a crib. The hypnotist looks after her as if she was his own daughter and both are very happy…


Comments

Re: Danielle's First Time - Drake66

Very nice.

Clever twist at the end, aswell. I didn't expect a "Where they are now" moment.

Re: Danielle's First Time - jslavel

Thanks!

Never tried my hand at writing a story before, glad someone liked it.

And yeah, I thought it would be cool to save the big reveal of what happened to each of them until the end.

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