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Interactive story: Nano

by PS360

Interactive story: Nano

Nano, Written By PS360



Jeff was like any 21 year old you would see, Masculine, Great life, Single, but suddenly that all changes as he gets turned into a test subject for a secret company.


Part 1: Prelude



Jeff woke up this morning at 8 am to start his daily mission, go to work, come home, and etc. He puts his clothes on, walks out of the door, gets in his car, and drives to work.

Jeff works in the Local Gym, Helping people do excercises for many people who wants to get thin or toned. As Jeff enters the Employee locker room to get dressed for today's quota, a repair man exits the locker room and bumps into him. "Sorry." Says Jeff, but the repair man keeps on walking without saying anything. As he gets dressed he notices the foul smell in the air, and soon as he was dressed he felt dizzy and stiff. Jeff tries to reach the door, but collapses on the spot. He blacks out on the floor.


Part 2: Awaken

As jeff regains consiousness, he noticed he's in a weird metallic room, him resting on the bed. He get's up and notices a one way mirror ahead of him. "Doctor, the test subject just woke up." said a voice from a speaker on the wall. there's some mumbling and suddenly another voice appears "Oh, hello there. You seem to be the jumpy one getting up from that bed so quickly." the speaker says again.
"Where am i? Who is this?!" Screams Jeff. "Now now there, your alright. Just calm down and tell me your name" Suddenly it hits jeff, he forgot who he was, where he worked, where he lived, everything he knew dissapeared. "I...I don't remember" Muttered Jeff. "Weird, Amesia. That fall must of knocked you out good." The Speaker said, "Now, We have a few tests to preform before your main injection so we are going to need you to go back to sleep."

'Injection? For What?' Thought Jeff, but before he knew it, he blacked out falling onto the bed.


Part 3: Alteration

Jeff regains Consciousness to the sound of a heart monitor beeping. He realizes he can't open his eyes or move. "Sir, what happens if this experiment goes wrong?" Said a mysterious voice from the left side of his body. "Don't Worry. This has been tested on thousands of patients before this one, so he will be our final test then we c-" The Heart Monitor suddenly beeps faster "Dammit! He's Awakening, Give him another shot of anesthesia!" suddenly Jeff feels something in his arm then slowly passes out.


Part 4: Testing

Jeff Wakes up once again in the metallic room, on the same bed. As he moves his upper body to sit on the bed, he Feels very dizzy, and feels something new in his body, but he can't tell what. He notices a tv with a Dvd Case on it that says "Watch immediately!" As he puts the dvd in, he sees this new test product, "B.U.R.N" Body Utilizing Reconstruction Nanobots, a new technology using the power of nanobot tech to be able to modify any part of the users body to their wishes, they can even alter the brain to bring about new personalities, change there I.Q., And more.

As suddenly as the movie stops, two people come in with a pair of clothes, a new id, along with passport, plane ticket, a phone, and money. There is also a silver remote with a LCD Screen on it. "Takes these, and go to where the plane ticket says, where we can track you the best. Here is some money to get a new apartment." The plane ticket is a trip to New York. As soon as i was dressed, was blindfolded, Put into a Armored bank truck, and drove to the airport. they dropped me off there. As i was waiting for the plane to get here, i held the LCD Remote in my hand. It said on the bottom "B.U.R.N. Control" and a few buttons on top that say stuff like "+" and "-" on them, in the middle there's a LCD and a D-Pad. I pressed the power button on the remote, and then it said on it "activating Nanobots" I felt a huge jolt through my body and i lay there in agony but could not scream, suddenly it was over and the remote said "Activated!" on it. As i flip through the menu on it, the one that caught my eye is the modify button. i select it and there's two options, "Personality" And "Body". What one do i pick?


I decided to make this a interactive story, where the readers pick what happens!

Post in the comments below what option you pick are and you shall Decide The fate of the story.

I will collect votes from the FIRST 10 COMMENTS THAT HAVE A VOTE IN THEM, then write the story from your choice.

Also, Do you guys think Interactive stories are good ideas? Write feedback too if you want

Options:

1)Personality

2)Body


Comments

Re: Interactive story: Nano - loony28

This is an interestingway to write your stories. I love interactives that transform people. My preference is body modification like changing sex so that's what I vote for. Continue on with option 2)Body.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - 88holland

I would say go with both actually. Make modifications to both.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - 88holland

go with both 1 and 2.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - Jeshi

I'm voting for 1

Re: Interactive story: Nano - dada_32

2

Re: Interactive story: Nano - 112-485-334

Personality

Re: Interactive story: Nano - iron_blade

Option #1 !!!!

Re: Interactive story: Nano - TF_Guy

If you have the time, why not wright both and let the reader chose their own path. that might get complicated though.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - PS360

I don't want it to become too complex

Re: Interactive story: Nano - prad

Vote for Both..

Re: Interactive story: Nano - Salahare

I'm going for 1.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - diapers_forever

1.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - PS360

I counted the ones with double votes and without them, personality still wins

Re: Interactive story: Nano - PS360

i guess i'll start working on personality soon.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - Janis_en_femme

Please go with #1.
Make him feminine and gay then want a female body.

Re: Interactive story: Nano - babyjack

both is the way to go

Re: Interactive story: Nano - TrueZero

Go with both

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